Sarah Pass

Wow this is incredibly deep. It sounds weird to say that I like something that is so sad but I really did and I wish it didn't end so soon. ...

Hey Persephoneia,this is a great start! but there are a few things you should change to make your story even better! There was a typo in the sentence "I was ...

Hi elfwriter97,this is a good start but there are a few changes I think you need to make. I think the way you are making the lines rhyme is a ...

Hey Carlito, I really liked your song! However there are a few things I would change though. Such as I don't think you had enough of a story,like were the ...

Hey retrodisco66,overall I really liked your poem but there are a few things that I would change such as: the line that says "you can sit it as well" I ...

I thought this was real,it felt very realistic like something that would happen in real life. though you did make one mistake when you mean to write for you wrote ...

Wow,first I have to say that I think you really figured out exactly how a person in this situation would feel. My teacher made us read poems like this last ...

I thought this was such a cool idea for you to try to understand what she was going through by pretending to be her. This was defiantly an out of ...

I thought this was a very interesting story> I really enjoyed reading it. I liked how you didn't have your main character fall for the boy she thought was cute ...

This was an interesting story but there are a few things you should change like in the part when you said that he could still feel eyes on him should ...

Hi,let me first say that I'm so sorry for what you and your family are going through. I just had two nitpicks though. One is I think you put my ...

This was so amazing!!! It reminding me of the kind of books my teacher has us read in our classical literature class. I loved that it wasn't your average love ...

I really enjoyed this story. I just didn't want to stop reading it. I do however wish there was a reason given for her disappearance. Also I felt that there ...

I was alone in one of the most amazing squares of my country. I was waiting for my mom because she was at work. I was eating a big and ...

First I want to say how sorry I am for the loss of your friend, I know this has the be the most tragic experience to be going through. I ...